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Macro Policies model essay

Assess whether increasing the retirement age is the most effective way to ensure fiscal sustainability in an ageing economy.

Essay, part (b) [15] · H2 Economics

This model essay is by Mr Eugene Toh, author of the H1 and H2 A Level Economics TYS answer keys, published by SAP and sold at Popular, and of 50 Model Essays (Shing Lee).

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Raising the retirement age is a rational, necessary measure that preserves tax revenue, slows retirement-related spending and supports labour supply in an ageing economy. But political, social and demographic limits mean it is not a silver bullet; it works best when complemented by supply-side reforms that broaden the tax base over the long run.

Examiner's note: what makes this an A

Assess means reaching a supported judgement, not just describing the policy. The key word is most effective, so the answer must benchmark raising the retirement age against at least one alternative, here supply-side reform.

Build the case first: continued employment sustains income and consumption taxes, defers retirement spending and lifts labour force participation and potential output. Then stress test it with political resistance, the limits of older workers' productivity and the risk to youth employment.

The discriminating conclusion is the multi-pronged judgement: raising the retirement age is necessary in the short to medium term but insufficient alone, because only broader reforms grow the economy and the tax base sustainably.

Introduction

As populations age, many governments face the growing challenge of fiscal sustainability, the ability to meet long-term public spending obligations without accumulating unsustainable debt. In Singapore, where life expectancy is rising and labour shortages are emerging in key sectors, the government plans to gradually raise the retirement age to 65 by 2030. This measure aims to reduce fiscal strain from an ageing population, but it is important to consider whether it alone is sufficient or whether alternative strategies offer more lasting solutions.

How raising the retirement age supports fiscal sustainability

Raising the retirement age retains older workers in the labour force, which supports the government's fiscal position in several ways. First, continued employment extends the working life of individuals, so income taxes continue to be collected. This maintains or even grows the revenue base, counteracting the decline in tax revenues typically associated with a shrinking and ageing workforce.

Secondly, as older workers continue to earn and spend, they contribute to consumption taxes such as the Goods and Services Tax. This keeps domestic demand robust and supports public finances through sustained indirect tax collections.

Thirdly, by delaying retirement, governments can postpone pension payouts or retirement-related social spending, easing short-term fiscal pressures. While this is less critical in Singapore given the self-funded nature of the CPF system, it still offers fiscal breathing room, especially as healthcare costs for the elderly continue to rise.

Finally, keeping older individuals economically active mitigates labour shortages, improves labour force participation rates and boosts potential output, helping to maintain economic growth despite demographic shifts.

Limits of raising the retirement age

Despite its benefits, increasing the retirement age is not a silver bullet. Political resistance is a real challenge. Many workers view a higher retirement age as a loss of entitlements or a delay in enjoying the fruits of their working life, which can lead to public discontent, particularly among lower-income or physically vulnerable workers.

Not all elderly workers are physically or mentally able to remain productive, especially in labour-intensive occupations such as construction, transport or manufacturing. Prolonging working life may lower productivity or increase reliance on medical subsidies and welfare, offsetting some fiscal gains.

Additionally, if older workers remain in jobs longer, this could reduce job openings for younger workers, leading to higher youth unemployment or underemployment, a politically sensitive issue in societies that value upward mobility and fresh talent pipelines. Raising the retirement age therefore provides a fiscal buffer but has diminishing returns and social trade-offs if implemented in isolation.

Supply-side policies as a complementary strategy

To ensure longer-term and more sustainable fiscal health, the government can adopt supply-side policies that raise productivity and competitiveness. These expand the economy's productive capacity, increasing output and broadening the tax base.

One key area is workforce upskilling and retraining. By improving the human capital of younger and older workers, the government enables them to command higher wages, boosting income tax revenue and consumption-based taxes. Singapore's SkillsFuture programme is a strong example.

Another area is attracting foreign direct investment into high-value sectors such as technology, biomedical sciences and finance. Such investment contributes to corporate tax revenues, stimulates job creation and enhances export competitiveness, positioning Singapore as a global economic hub and helping ensure fiscal strength through economic dynamism.

However, supply-side policies come with high upfront costs and long implementation lags. Infrastructure upgrades, training programmes and research subsidies require sustained government investment. Their success also hinges on worker receptiveness and private sector cooperation, which cannot be guaranteed. Older workers may be reluctant to retrain, while firms may continue to prefer younger, cheaper hires despite subsidies.

Evaluative conclusion

Increasing the retirement age is a rational and necessary policy for ageing economies like Singapore. It preserves government revenues, slows retirement-related spending and bolsters labour supply. However, its effectiveness is limited by political, social and demographic constraints, and it does not address the underlying need to grow the economy and broaden the tax base over the long term. It is therefore an important short to medium-term measure that should be complemented by broader supply-side reforms, including upskilling, improving labour market efficiency and promoting innovation and investment. Such a multi-pronged strategy is more likely to deliver the sustained revenue generation, productivity growth and fiscal flexibility required to keep Singapore's public finances sustainable through its demographic transition.

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Questions students ask

Why is raising the retirement age not enough on its own?

It retains tax revenue and labour supply, but faces political and physical limits and does not grow the tax base. Only broader supply-side reforms expand productive capacity and revenue sustainably, so a policy mix is more effective.

Why does Singapore's CPF system change the analysis?

Because CPF is self-funded, raising the retirement age in Singapore is less about deferring state pension payouts and more about sustaining tax revenue, labour supply and managing rising healthcare costs for the elderly.

Are these the official answers?

No. This is a model essay by Mr Eugene Toh, author of the H1 and H2 A Level Economics TYS answer keys published by SAP and sold at Popular. Use it as a guide to structure and rigour, then write it in your own words.

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